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Thursday 7 July 2016

Hinerangi Suzie and the space nuts...


Walt: understand multiple perspectives and viewpoints.



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Racing off into space Gort and Freeble get ready for lift off. As Gort and Freeble went out of space they both enjoyed seeing the view. As the spaceship BLASTED off Freeble and Gort had an argument of who could see the best planet in the solar system. Freeble “said Mercury was the best planet and Gort “said” that Mars was the best planet in the solar system.  

As soon as they landed on Uranus they just noticed that there were 7 planets away from the Sun, They were freezing cold. They also noticed that they landed on the wrong planet, The planet they were meant to be on was Jupiter. So then the spaceship located to Jupiter and setted off. Once they setted off they all started singing and than fell fast asleep.

The next day Gort and Freeble found the driver fast asleep in the front seat. Once they found him fast asleep Gort and Freeble found a dinosaur at the back of the spaceship, they only made it half way from Jupiter. Soon on Freeble started steering the wheel and Gort tried to take the dinosaur out of the spaceship, The dinosaur was the driver's friend. Suddenly the driver woke up and saw Gort fighting with the dinosaur trying to get him out of the spaceship.

1 hour later. The driver “said Gort leave him alone he’s my pet not yours. Later on Freeble made it to Jupiter and had a party altogether. As soon as they landed on Jupiter they all had a feed before they got there. Once they got there they had a delicious picnic and fell fast asleep. THE END...   


Task Description:

For this task I had to write a story continuing the story from the book. I had to pick other characters to fit in my story. The one I picked was dinosaurs. The End...

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